Our team's profile story was about Carly Garrison- who is a bikini designer. Carly runs a Bikini making business in Kapa'a called ''CG Bikinis.'' The people who were contributed to it were Ethen, Megan, Nahele, and me. We all worked together to edit the story.
The final turned out was not as good as I hope it would be. The last voice overs were before the last interview. We could have done better by watching the story slowly, so will will noticed the mistake. But we were in a hurry, because it was almost at the end of school. Everyone was rushing, and so did we. We were having about 3 or 4 minutes left.
Looking back at the critique result, I have to agree to the people who voted 2 out of 4 for us. We deserved that. Just a little mistake can affect your whole story.
T8: CG Bikinis by Nahele, Ethan, Meagan, Tu
| 1 | 7 | 24% |
| 2 | 11 | 38% |
| 3 | 10 | 34% |
| 4 | 1 | 3% |
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